I would like to ask for an official review on my overall band score as well as detailed band scores on each module of my first test at IELTS China which I took On March 19th 2011. I am attaching my original result notice for review.
第二段:
I believe that my writing score should be at least 1 band above the original issued score.
第三段:
I would like to thank you for reviewing my original test scores. I am certain that the scores received are not reflective of my true abilities and will appreciate it very much if you could further review my results at your convenience. I will gladly pay for the review fee.